在雅思寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，轉(zhuǎn)折鏈接、因果鏈接、遞進(jìn)鏈接、舉例等都少不了銜接詞的使用，不少同學(xué)雅思寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)失高分的原因之一，就是因?yàn)榫渥雍投温渲g銜接不當(dāng)。下面就來(lái)看看雅思寫(xiě)作銜接詞使用常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題。
1、銜接詞誤用導(dǎo)致的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
a. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction. Because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives.
錯(cuò)誤點(diǎn)：because是連詞，不可單獨(dú)成句。
正確的句子：The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction, because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. (選自劍7Test3Task2書(shū)后范文）
b. Governments ought to restrict advertisements for harmful products. Such as alcohol and tobacco, however, they do not have the power to control other forms of advertising.
錯(cuò)誤點(diǎn)：such as 后加同位語(yǔ)，不可單獨(dú)成句；however是副詞，不可連接兩個(gè)句子。
正確的句子：Governments ought to restrict advertisements for harmful products, such as alcohol and tobacco. However, they do not have the power to control other forms of advertising.（例句選自考官范文）
2、銜接詞誤用導(dǎo)致的邏輯錯(cuò)誤
Some people support that education should help students become useful to the society, because students will have more knowledge after being educated.
錯(cuò)誤點(diǎn)：學(xué)生受教育，變得有學(xué)問(wèn)這個(gè)點(diǎn)和教育應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)學(xué)生貢獻(xiàn)社會(huì)沒(méi)有明確因果邏輯關(guān)系，使用because這個(gè)明顯因果邏輯詞，前后句邏輯混亂。
正確的句子：Education should make students useful members of society because education is financially supported by the government and students who make use of the resource should repay the society.
句子間的邏輯：因?yàn)檎Y助了教育，所以教育應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)對(duì)社會(huì)有用的人，回饋社會(huì)。邏輯通。
3、“走極端型”的銜接問(wèn)題
First of all, the late parenthood is because of the rising cost of living. As we all know, young people are often paid less in the working world. Therefore, they are less likely to save enough money to guarantee a high standard of living. Furthermore, since most young people are well-educated, they are fully aware of the importance of living environment to a child’s growth. Besides, gender equality allows a large number of women to pursue their career ambitions. However, if they have children early, they have to pay more attention to their family commitment. As a result, they may miss out opportunities to improve their job skills and get promoted.
問(wèn)題表現(xiàn)：連接詞過(guò)度使用，這個(gè)段落每一個(gè)句子都用了一個(gè)連接詞，且不是每個(gè)連接都足夠準(zhǔn)確，如furthermore一般多用于補(bǔ)充新觀點(diǎn)。這種寫(xiě)法就很容易被考官判定為“mechanical writing”，后果是Coherence and Cohesion (連貫與銜接）這一部分的得分不超過(guò)6分。
上段可調(diào)整如下：
The late parenthood among young adults is perhaps attributed to the rising cost of living. Young people are often paid less in the working world, sothey are less likely to save enough money to guarantee a high standard of living if they need to raise a child. Since most young people are well-educated, they are fully aware of the importance of living environment to a child’s growth. This is why they are unwilling to have children until they are well-prepared. Another reason for this trend is the gender equality allows a large number of women to pursue their career ambitions. If they have children early, they have to pay more attention to their family commitment and may miss out opportunities to improve their job skills and get promoted.
4、常用的銜接方法
①連接詞 （so, since, another reason）
②代詞(they; this; this trend)
③替換&重復(fù) （young people; have children early/late的替換和重復(fù)）
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